1) To create mood in my writing by using interesting vocabulary, similes and metaphors.
2) To use different sentence structures for effect.3) To add detail to my ideas by using specific vocabulary and to give examples.
The Goal I am improving on:
The goal that I think I am most improving on is the third goal because in my piece of writing below I have kind of used specific vocabulary.
The Goal I am working on:
The goal that I think I am working on is the first goal because I don't really use interesting vocabulary or adjectives in my descriptive writing or any type of writing.
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