I am a Year 8 student at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my Teacher are Mrs Tui.and Mrs Lauchlan
Hi Mikaela, Your writing just amazed me. It showed me that you truly are a smart writer especially when you’re talking about pets. All your reasons are very true in a lot of ways but there could be many others ways where it isn’t true. Stella
Hi Mikaela, I really like that you are re-confirming your structure on explanation writing.I thought your writing was really well structured. I think next time you should say why you choose a dog.
Hi Mikaela,
ReplyDeleteYour writing just amazed me. It showed me that you truly are a smart writer especially when you’re talking about pets.
All your reasons are very true in a lot of ways but there could be many others ways where it isn’t true.
Stella
Hi Mikaela,
ReplyDeleteI really like that you are re-confirming your structure on explanation writing.I thought your writing was really well structured. I think next time you should say why you choose a dog.
Hi Mikaela
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you explain and gave so many reasons about having a pet dog, I really want a pet dog to.
Keep up the good work!!