tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post5056050579757793718..comments2023-09-30T04:15:33.401+13:00Comments on Mikaela @ St Pius X Catholic School: Week 2 : Day 4 : Activities 1, 2 + Bonus ActivitySPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post-52291672825762820862018-01-26T14:41:11.929+13:002018-01-26T14:41:11.929+13:00Kia Ora Mikaela,
My name is Jordan and I'm th...Kia Ora Mikaela,<br /><br />My name is Jordan and I'm the Kootuitui (Papakura, South Auckland) cluster manager. Alongside Billy, I'm really lucky to be able to comment on your blog!<br /><br />Well done on getting so far through the Summer Learning Journey 2017-2018 programme, you should be really proud of yourself. <br />I'll be commenting on Activity 1: An Eventful Experience, and Activity 2: A Call to Arms.<br /><br />Activity 1: An Eventful Experience. <br />Ka pai for finding out about two key events that took place during WWII. I like that you've included one of the most important facts, that being when war itself, was declared. I'm particularly interested in the Womens Auxiliary Air Force (WAAF) — they sound so cool, do you know of anything that they did that was really great during the war?<br /><br />Activity 2: A Call to Arms.<br />Well done for finding out about a Victoria Cross winner. I've read a few other stories about Charles Upham on other student's blogs across New Zealand. One student told me that her Mother actually met Mr. Upham. He was a customer at her work place; how cool is that? <br />Do you think you would ever do something as valiant as Mr. Upham? <br /><br />I look forward to your response!<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />Jordan. SLJ in Kootuituihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14178382229358279185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post-36854496456064093402017-12-31T17:57:09.050+13:002017-12-31T17:57:09.050+13:00Hi Mikela,
First of all great job on the story I r...Hi Mikela,<br />First of all great job on the story I really liked it. And when I was reading it it was like putting my shoe into Dorthys so I can experience what she is in.<br /><br />By Akesa Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post-11852711933620106582017-12-31T15:26:35.782+13:002017-12-31T15:26:35.782+13:00Hey Mikaela, Outstanding work. I wish I could stor...Hey Mikaela, Outstanding work. I wish I could stories this great as well, I like every part of your story that I can't even chose which part is my favourite part. Keep it up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post-41248583179852567392017-12-29T10:10:51.769+13:002017-12-29T10:10:51.769+13:00Hey there Mikaela, another great post. Well done, ...Hey there Mikaela, another great post. Well done, I have really enjoyed reading your story that you have written. It sounds like such a terrible situation to be stuck in. You've used some really nice language here. I like how you spoke about trembling to the ground, or the gush of water flying through the door. <br /><br />It's quite an exhilarating story, I found myself reading quickly, moving from one sentence to the next, desperate to find out what happens. You've done a great job. Do you usually write stories?<br /><br />I wish I could write stories this well.<br /><br />Keep it up!<br />BillyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15645088588780464837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-925021378698558589.post-35002834280290530172017-12-28T12:01:35.980+13:002017-12-28T12:01:35.980+13:00Hello Mikaela, My name is Amie I am also participa...Hello Mikaela, My name is Amie I am also participating in the Summer Learning Journey. You have shown very accurate and interesting stories. It made me think of Wizard of Oz because their main character is Dorothy. Maybe next time you could try make separate blog posts for your activities? Well done!<br />From: AmieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com